Friday, September 12, 2025

Update #2 - September 2025

 Well, I couldn't leave it alone -  I'm slowly reading through the manuscript again, still finding the occasional typo or punctuation mistake, or changing a word here and there. One of my proofreaders has also found a couple of things I missed. A writer's work is never done. I've also noticed some themes I didn't notice while writing, partly I think because there were so many interruptions. It's interesting how these things develop. Taliesin and Fraechan, for example, both have "I won't do this again" moments. Gwernin's son Ianto learns a lot during the summer, and becomes an important character. And of course there's the big reveal at the end, but I've known about that one since the beginning.

 We're still having warm or occasionally hot weather - 80s and sometimes 90s. It's ironic that we look like having a late first frost when my tomatoes have mostly quit producing. Still, there's always more yard work to do, and at least I'm now getting more beans since the Japanese beetles are no longer eating the flowers.


Thursday, September 4, 2025

Update #1 - September 2025

 I'm mostly trying to leave the manuscript alone for a couple of weeks until I get feedback from the proofreaders. Instead I've pulled out the Mac Criomthann stories which will make up most of that next collection. I may however try uploading the current draft of the manuscript to Lulu to see if they've instituted any annoying new changes to the process in the last two years. After I publish The Well of Wisdom and the Mac Criomthann collection #3, my next book will be another spin-off: Taliesin: King Arthur's Bard. I have a lot of bits and pieces already for that one, so hopefully it will only take a year to write, not two!

I've been doing a lot of yard work the last week, partly because the city inspector came by and left me a notice about tall weeds. This has happened before, and I think I've got on his "naughty list", but it's stuff that needed doing anyway now that the weather has cooled down a bit. At least no more raccoon damage, but there are no more tomatoes for them now. Also the Japanese beetles have mostly disappeared except for a few on the remaining (highly shredded) Virginia Creeper. A gardener's work is never done - I'm  looking forward to winter.
 

Thursday, August 28, 2025

Update #4 - August 2025

 I've finished my first editing pass, including formatting, and shared the results with three friends who have agreed to do simple proofreading, mostly looking for unclear or confusing bits, inconsistencies (e.g. X has brown hair in chapter 2, red hair in chapter 5...), and simple typos. If anyone else is interested, email me as gwernin at gmail.com. I would need any feedback no later than mid October, preferably earlier, as my planned publication date is Nov. 1st. Total page count is currently 364 pages including title pages, maps, and appendices. 

We've now had a week of cool damp weather, and it's wonderful! I've harvested all the ripe and almost-ripe tomatoes because of the raccoon incursions last weekend, and will be canning a lot of them tomorrow. Other than that, I'm just enjoying the early autumn weather, and will be starting some yard cleanup. 

The seasons are changing...

Thursday, August 21, 2025

Update #3 - August 2025

 I finished chapter 31 yesterday and added it to the manuscript. I am now in the process of proofreading the whole thing. After I make any needed corrections, it will go to two or three people who are willing to read it and find anything I've missed. Then I'll upload it Lulu and Smashwords. My planned publication date is November 1st - only a year after my original target, sigh.

Last weekend the raccoons finally discovered my tomatoes. After losing some two nights in a row, I picked all the ripe and almost-ripe ones. The raccoons came one more night and caused a certain amount of damage, possibly out of frustration. I've now had three raccoon-free nights, and hope that they've found someone else's garden to pillage. Also after a week of mostly very hot weather, we should get a break starting tomorrow. On the whole, things are looking up.

Thursday, August 14, 2025

Update #2 - August 2025

 Slow progress on Chapter 31, which is the last one. Very hot weather yesterday and today doesn't help. I'm currently tinkering with a praise song; once that's finished the rest should fall into place. Then I can start proofreading the whole manuscript. I'm still looking for anyone who'd like to help with that. It would be a matter of noticing any typos or inconsistencies, nothing technical.

The intermittent very hot days (upper 90s) have not helped the gardening, although the beans seem to like it. Of the eight tomato plants I started with, three have died, all large fruit types, but the sweet 100s, romas, and purple topped ones are now being very productive, and I am finally getting the occasional zucchini. I haven't had appreciable rain since early June, which is a bit unusual - there are thunderstorms from time to time, but they go around me. At least we're almost halfway through August.

Thursday, August 7, 2025

Update #1 - August 2025

 I finished Chapter 30 yesterday, which took Gwernin and his friends to the Well of Wisdom, also called Segais, which is the source of the Boyne. There were interesting revelations <grin>. I've also started work on Chapter 31, the last one in the book, which will take everyone home. After that I get to read my way through the whole 350+ page manuscript, looking for typos, inconsistencies, or just things that could be phrased better. Anyone want to join in the fun?

This week has been dry and very hot, but things should at least cool off some starting Saturday. I'm still running a sprinkler in the back most evenings, which helps some. The garden is mostly doing well - lots of purple podded beans and sweet 100 tomatoes. The romas and the basil are also thriving, and the zucchinis may finally produce a couple of zuchs. I've had some nocturnal raccoon visits, but no appreciable damage so far - I think they come partly for water from the bird bath and an easy path from the alley to the street since I don't have privacy fences like everyone else in the block.

Thursday, July 31, 2025

update #5 - July 2025

 I finally finished chapter 29, and have made a tentative start on chapter 30, slowed down by some not very successful research and a need to take a break in this week's milder weather. Since I couldn't find exact information on the location on the physical source of the Boyne, I will make some assumptions and go on from there. I tried to find it on one of my trips, but it's apparently on private land and inaccessible to wandering tourists. Topo maps only help so much.

After last weekend's upper 90s, the mid to lower 80s of the last few days are a welcome break. It did take a couple of days to get the house cooled down, and it won't last, but it's wonderful right now. The beans are doing great and setting beans, most of the tomatoes (but not all) are doing well, and the basil is happy. With August starting tomorrow, we're at the end of the Celtic summer, but not alas the Colorado one. 

 

Thursday, July 24, 2025

Update #4 - July 2025

 Chapter 29 is about half done, partly through using descriptions of places earlier in the book. Gwernin et al have arrived at Bru na Boinne, and there is about to be excitement. The weather is cooler today, so I can probably finish most of the chapter -- I've had the central part of it in my mind long enough, after all!

We badly need some rain, but the beans, tomatoes, etc are doing well. I've been running a sprinkler in the back in the evening some days, but at least such grass as is left in the front isn't growing and therefore doesn't need to be mowed. Lots of birds in the back most of the time -- yesterday the 4 flickers and sometimes 5 or 6 bluejays were here at once. The flicker family is out there now going to it on the suet cake!
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Thursday, July 17, 2025

Update #3 - July 2025

 Finally finished chapter 28 ("A Triple Death"), and made at least a start on chapter 29 (tentatively titled "A Last Fence"). This takes Gwernin et al back to Bru na Boinne, where some exciting things are set to happen. After that, one more chapter ("The Well of Wisdom") before Gwernin and Ianto go home. Slightly cooler weather helps since I had to write two praise songs for Taliesin and Fraechan to sing in a competition at the Tailtiu Oenach, which took some concentration.

Gardening is going well, despite Japanese beetles on some of the bean leaves. At least slug damage is now minimal. The tomatoes are mostly setting heavily, so I should have ripe ones before long. And one zucchini plant finally set a zucchini! The fact that we're not getting much rain at least means I don't have to mow, although there is always more yard work.

 

Thursday, July 10, 2025

Update #2 - July 2025

Still haven't finished chapter 28 because I decided I need one more scene, and the weather has been too hot for my brain to function properly. Clearly I won't finish the first draft of the book by the end of July, sigh.

Gardening is going OK, although now that slugs are less of a problem for the beans, the Japanese beetles have arrived. At least they don't go for the tomato plants to any great extent. All of them are setting tomatoes now, so a lot of them should be getting ripe by the end of the month. If I have an oversupply, I'll freeze some - it will probably still be too hot for canning.